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The Nimh Game: Jolina's Wrath.

Story:

Prologe
-History on the Nimh Mice and the Colony, takes place after the film.
-Jolina's Backstory, from child to war veteran.
Part 1 (beginning)
-Reports of odd activity in the sewers.
-You (as Jolina) are dispatched.
-Mission one: Fight off Feral Rats from outpost.
-Return to colony.
Part 2 (revelation)
-Investigate and destroy Spider problem in lower colony.
-ACTION SCENE: Door breach, you are met with enemy combatants.
-Enemies seem to be mice, full clad in armor. SteamPunk style.
-Destroy enemies, and move to the main colony.
-Opens up to large scale battle, with zeplin style dropships, and army of Armored Mice. Colony is destroyed.
Part 3 (escape)
-flee to the sewers, using Remote control car.
-ACTION SCENE: enemies follow in crafts, as do feral rats.
-chase ensues, you end up in the forest.
Part 4 (journey)
-journey through an imense forest, fight off common predetors.
-Visit Great Owl (by accident)
-Journey starts towards the colony (rat colony)
Part 5 (ruins)
-Rat colony is in ruins, few survivors.
-Remnants of the mice enemies lurk in the destroyed colony.
-Find Justin and the survivors.
-discover mrs. Brisby has been captured, along with the stone.
-Interigate captured enemy Mouse.
Part 6 (Preperation)
-discover enemies are indeed Nimh.
-journey on jeremy to the Nimh labs.
-enemy aircraft follow, chase ensues.
Part 7 (the labs)
-sneak through Nimh labs, avoiding spiders and mouse traps.
-horror style, stealth gameplay.
-Discover lost Nimh serums, and investigate random clues.
-defend against enemy mice who follow you.
-interigate leader, discover their hidout.
Part 8 (to hell we march)
-Journey through the dark forest.
-ACTION SCENE: get attacked by cross bow wielding rats in robes.
-Walk through many hunter camps.
-ACTION SCENE: get attacked by huge black like rat (ranger) you are only survivor.
Part 9 (the hunter cadre's)
-Sneak through hunter camps.
-Discover Ranger, Rapta, and mrs. Brisby.
-Discover plot to wield the stone.
-get discovered, fight your way through slews of Demon Hunter Rats.
-Escape.
Part 10 (behind enemy lines)
-fight your way through enemy compounds of both mice and rats.
-Destroy Nimh serum supply.
-ACTION SCENE: fight janus, who is in a large robotic steam machine, driven by an organ he plays.
-make way to the temple grounds.
Part 11 (the temple)
-make your way through a gauntlet of rats and a few mice.
-ACTION SCENE: battle with ranger over a firey spike pit.
Part 12 (the devil herself)
-Boss battle with Rapta in the temple where mrs. brisby is held.
-Free mrs. brisby.
-ACTOIN SCENE: mrs. brisby uses the stone to keep the cave from crashing down.
Part 13 (escape)
-escape the temple, using bridges and such that mrs. brisby makes for you by using the stone.
-stalagtite knocks mrs. brisby unconcious.
-use the stone to forge a hole in the top of the temple to escape.
-escape with mrs. brisby.
Epiloge
-return to the rat colony with mrs.brisby.
-survivors of the Mouse colony have arrived.
-begin building a joint colony for both to co exist.
-finally get some R&R with your family.

-End story-

and thats the plot line for my game. Here's where you come in. Though I already have many ideas for designs and such for the enemies, allies, vehicals and such. I want to hear what YOU think would be cool in this game. What do YOU think that some of these would look like. What would the steampunk enemy mice look like, the munkish hellish rats, the valley guards, the flying machines.. all that.

tell me your ideas and share them with everyone else here for critique and brainstorming.

LordDirk

and thats the plot line for my game. Here's where you come in. Though I already have many ideas for designs and such for the enemies, allies, vehicals and such. I want to hear what YOU think would be cool in this game. What do YOU think that some of these would look like. What would the steampunk enemy mice look like, the munkish hellish rats, the valley guards, the flying machines.. all that.

tell me your ideas and share them with everyone else here for critique and brainstorming.

LordDirk

Part 1 (beginning)
-Reports of odd activity in the sewers.
-You (as Jolina) are dispatched.
-Mission one: Fight off Feral Rats from outpost.
-Return to colony.

Hmm, Hey LordDirk. Remember at my forum you said Daniel (My character ) would be a good addition. It would be best to see the characters before you start the whole game. If you add him, ( I'm just saying if you do :wink: )would you show him in the beginning? :)

I'll come up with more when I have time. Good luck on the game! 8)
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-Nimhster 8)

Good, no Great storyline. It's different, exciting, and action-packed. Any other characters you including? Keep up the good work.

Great overveiw on the game`s story, reminds of the Mad Max movies and others of an apocalyptic style, the tech thingys seen to be of interest to me, on how the rats and mice, evil and good use man`s tech skills to make weapons of the own.
Thorn Valley is gone and kaos rules.

Is Jolina the only playable character ? , I`ve seen your pics of this tuff girl.
My old brain is churring, Hope I can help later :?